I am man without order, knitted together by a perfect being without blame, without blot. A man with heart trying to remember whence he came, a courageous man without the one he loves.
Trifextra week: Thirty four: Describe something that is three different things at the same time. Oh, and do it in 33 words!
September 21st, 2012 at 5:30 pm
This struck me as lonely, but also hopeful. You don’t have to be perfect to be courageous, but it’s not for the weak or the lazy.
September 21st, 2012 at 6:24 pm
Thank you for reading, dunce. It is a little bit of both, I fully understand what you are saying. Thank you again.
September 21st, 2012 at 8:08 pm
This is a really personal, introspective piece. Nicely done.
September 22nd, 2012 at 5:56 pm
Christine, thank you I enjoyed writing it!
September 21st, 2012 at 11:09 pm
Wow. Very philosophical. I like the questions it poses without actually posing them.
September 22nd, 2012 at 5:57 pm
Wisper, I try to keep my readers in awe. Thank you!
September 22nd, 2012 at 2:35 am
Very poignant. Puts me in mind of our troops.
September 22nd, 2012 at 5:57 pm
FKC, thank you, I see what you are trying to say.
September 22nd, 2012 at 11:12 am
I really love the honesty of this piece, and the words, beautifully said.
September 22nd, 2012 at 5:58 pm
Dear Kelly, thank you for your kind words.
September 22nd, 2012 at 1:16 pm
I like your choice of unexpected words. Nicely crafted.
September 22nd, 2012 at 5:58 pm
Linda, thank you for reading and for your input. I try to keep my readers interested.
September 22nd, 2012 at 3:54 pm
It is very nice how you can put it all out there. I feel for you (or your character). Nicely written.
September 22nd, 2012 at 5:59 pm
Lumdog, thank you, it is me in a nutshell! 🙂
September 22nd, 2012 at 6:12 pm
I really enjoyed this. very touching.
September 22nd, 2012 at 10:22 pm
Thanks you Deana, I try hard to bring both emotion and love to my readers.
September 22nd, 2012 at 11:41 pm
Very nicely put…keep the writing coming brotha!
September 23rd, 2012 at 4:18 pm
Thanks Mike, I appreciate the compliment! I am writing as much as I can.
September 23rd, 2012 at 1:31 am
I love how this challenge has allowed us each a way to be introspective. 🙂 well done.
September 23rd, 2012 at 4:19 pm
Barbara, thank you for reading and these challenges help bring out the creative side in all of us. Hope you are well.
September 23rd, 2012 at 9:31 am
This is so good 🙂 An awesome piece of deep, thoughtful writing 😀
AmyBird x
September 23rd, 2012 at 4:20 pm
Hey thanks a lot Amy for your kind words! I appreciate you taking the time to read it.
September 27th, 2012 at 10:29 pm
Our lives are in Him
So even if seemingly a man without direction or order will know which way to go
Remember your footsteps are ordered by the Lord
He is perfect without stain or blemish no mistakes are His
We are come to show His glory
And HE has also created you a beautiful manifestation of His love
Be well my precious one
Caryn
October 10th, 2012 at 11:13 am
Hey Gabe . . . . don’t know if you’ll find this . . . .[being so low on the totem pole as it were] . . . Just wanted to let you know that I have finally gotten something on the website. Tell you man, I really hate the blog format; could have done it quicker simply by creating a website from scratch. Anyway, am posted and you can see it when you get a chance:
http://www.anatomyofaserigraph.com.
Hope things are going well for you. Haven’t heard lately. You gotta keep me posted . . . smile.
Rein Whitt-Pritchette
Artist || Serigrapher